Hello again!!  Chibi-Mamoru Darien Chiba here!!!  As you can see, I'm 
back in the habit again.

This fanfic has its sights on Claribel Mei'ou (a.k.a. Quasar Sailor 
Pluto) and tells the story of how she meets her guardian dog Cereberus 
and goes about her relationship with him before July 2996 which is the 
month that "Sailor Senshi Heiresses" takes place in.

The possible hangups I see here are as follows:

1.	The family name of Claribel's father:
1A.	"Del Trabajador" is ONE name, not two.
1B.	"Del Trabajador" is pronounced like this:  (Del Tra-ba-HA-dor).
1C.	The 'j' is pronounced like an English 'h'.

2.	The family name of Cleopatra's father:

2A.	"Caballero" is pronounced like this:  (Ka-BA-yer-o).
2B.	The first syllable is like the word 'caught' and the 'll' is pronounced like an English 'y'.

3.	The Sailor Scouts' daughters:  I will refer to them by the names 
they established for themselves in Chapter 20 of "Sailor Senshi 
Heiresses", but since this takes place before "Sailor Senshi 
Heiresses", they'll refer to each other and their parents and the 
Sailor Scouts will refer to them as "Young" followed by the name of 
their guardian planet (i. e.: Quasar Sailor Pluto would be called 
Young Pluto by her peers and the Sailor Scouts).

4.	If you get hung up by anything else I have not mentioned, email 
me at (CMDChiba@hotmail.com).

DISCLAIMER:  The world of Sailor Moon doesn't belong to me.  It is the 
creation of Naoko Takeuchi.  The Sailor Scouts' daughters and their 
quasar-driven powers belong to me, as do this story and the characters 
Lieutenant Zaccheus Caballero, Captain Griffith MacGrinrun, and 
President Kerwin Del Trabajador (Yes, they're the same ones from 
"Sailor Senshi Heiresses").  Umbriel, Triton, and Cereberus also 
belong to me.  Okay, did I get everything?  I thought so.